Christmas celebrations are already well under way in this house. The advent calendars are out, the Christmas music is on, and we have a stack of Christmas (and Hanukkah) stories in our library bag. Nothing like a good story to help set the holiday mood right?
I had so much fun participating in Susanna Hill‘s Halloweensie contest that I decided to enter her Holiday Contest too. The challenge: write a children’s story in which wild weather impacts the holidays. In 350 words or less. Here is my entry:
“Sugar!” muttered Dad. Sam looked up from his book.
“We’re stuck.” Sam looked out the car window. He couldn’t see anything but white. Every once in a while a large snowflake hit the window.
Dad called Ace Towing on his cell phone. “I see. Ok. Merry Christmas to you too.” But Dad didn’t sound very merry. “Sam,” he groaned, “we’re stranded.”
Stranded? But he still had to decorate the gingerbread house. And wrap Dad’s gift. “But what about Christmas?” Sam whispered.
Dad flipped on the radio. “…A wall of snow coming in off the lake has overwhelmed snowplows, leaving dozens of motorists stranded on Highway…” Dad turned off the radio.
Sam zipped up his coat and put his hat and mittens back on. He thought about their Christmas tree and sparkling decorations. He thought about the stockings that still needed to be hung for Santa. “But how will Santa find me?” Sam asked.
“Santa will leave presents at the house,” sighed Dad. But Sam knew all about Santa. Santa only came if you were sleeping. If you were visiting Grandma for Christmas, Santa would find you there. But Sam wasn’t visiting Grandma. Sam was stranded on Highway 1. Sam needed to tell Santa where he was. But how?
Sam watched the snow. If he weren’t stranded he’d be sipping hot cocoa and checking NORAD’s Santa tracker.
That’s it! He could call the Santa Tracker hotline and ask them to send Santa a message!
After some explaining Sam was on Dad’s phone with Sergeant Bleak at NORAD. Sergeant Bleak said he’d do his best to get Sam’s message to Santa.
Five hours later Sam woke up to a tap, tap, tap on the window. “Santa!” Sam cheered. Dad rolled down the car window. Santa passed them hot chocolate, warm cookies, and two warm blankets wrapped in ribbon.
“Hang tight,” said Santa, “the roads will be clear soon.” Sam waved as Santa disappeared into the falling snow. Then Sam and his Dad snuggled under the blankets, sang Christmas carols, sipped hot cocoa, and nibbled scrumptious cookies until the snowplows arrived.
I hope you’re feeling warm, cozy, and Christmasy now. (Did you notice the writing on my Santa picture? No that’s not my signature. I jotted down “Carnivores, by Aaron Reynolds” to remind my self to order it on interlibrary loan. I think the littles will love it.)
Don’t forget to stop by Susanna’s blog to check out the other stories!
17 thoughts on “Happy Holidays!”
Santa should work for AAA! 😀 What a thrill it’d be to be visited by him in a stuck car.
Very sweet. What a good idea to call NORAD. I’m glad Santa found them.
I really enjoyed your child-driven story. Very original with NORAD involved. And, magical at the end.
Modern technology meets magical holiday! It’s very realistic how the child knows more about technology 🙂
I love the Santa tracker! Good story and illustration!
Nothing like some good ol’ Christmas magic. Very touching ending.
We check NORAD too!!! Smart cookie of a kid. hahah. 🙂
Aw, a touch of human kindness. Loved it.
How very cool of Santa to be so concerned about them. 🙂 Nicely done.
Glad Santa saved the day! Nicely done.
Santa tracker :). Nice.
I like the Santa tracker too! And the sweet picture.
Lovely story, Marla! You did a great job of showing Sam’s concern and Dad’s weariness. And what a resourceful fellow Sam was to think of NORAD 🙂 I’m glad Santa came with Christmas cheer – even Dad was singing carols at the end 🙂 Nicely done! Thanks so much for joining in the holiday fun!
Oh so nice. Smart solution to get the message to NORAD and thank goodness it worked *wink*
I really felt our current world in this story from the cell phone to the NORAD Santa Tracker. 🙂 I felt sorry for them being stranded and was happy to see that Santa found them in the end. He brought the perfect warm gifts for them. 🙂
thank goodness for Santa and hot cocoa. 🙂
Yay for Sam’s inventiveness, yay for the Santa delivery of hot chocolate and blankets, yay for your story, Marla…lots of fun. 😉